Since I changed my topic of my paper, everything has been going a lot smoother.
Introduction- This is where I talk about new years resolutions and weight loss to introduce the topic. Then I go into the problem of obesity
Body- I talk about how we could help end obesity in America. I have 4-5 main points to make about changes that the government could make to help the situation.
1. Portion sizes at restaurants
2. Nutritional info on menus
3. Banning high-fat/high-sugar ads during the high watched tv times
4. improving the content in fast food
5. (maybe something else)
Conclusion- Wrapping up how these changes could help solve Americas obesity problem